Welcome to my blog, I'm a student at Paroa School in Greymouth, New Zealand.
Ka rawe Clara! It looks like you have really thought about what could have happened after you go whacked in the eye with a bat. Maybe next time you could angle your arrows so it is easier to follow each path.
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For writing, we are learning how to be real storytellers. Today we looked at obstacles and how it changes the image!
Ka rawe Clara! It looks like you have really thought about what could have happened after you go whacked in the eye with a bat. Maybe next time you could angle your arrows so it is easier to follow each path.
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