Childhood dreams

I am "I need exercise", Unfit feeling fat.
I am eating, like joy just entered my body.
I am Sleeping, laying on a fluffy cloud.
I am getting dizzy, the world spinning around me.
I am baking, making Gorden Ramsey's dessert.
I am "sorry I just ate", the unpleasant smell of the food wafting under my nose
I am sick faking, laying in bed covered beneath boredness and regret.
I am bunny hopping, jumping up to the sky.
I am road trips, Moving past.

This week we have been doing lots of poetry. A few days ago we had to write our own *My* poem about the subject we chose. Then today we had to mix it up and chose 10 things from that poem and make each one a descriptive short sentence about it. I found this really challenging because I was quite confused and I didn't know that you had to write a descriptive short sentence but then I finally got it. Maybe next time I could improve by adding a bit more detail.

My Child Hood Poem

My eating. My sleeping.
My water fight. My yellow kite,
My "yay". My holiday.
My lockdown. My "I want a gown".
My school. My pool.
My Dad. My days sad.
My Mum. My days fun.
My yummy food. My angry mood.
My " I'm tired". My bomb fire.
My road trips. My tramp flips.
My losing my teddy bear. My "It's not fair!"
My shopping. My bunny hopping.
My baking. My sick faking.
My getting dizzy. My " Oh no! My hair is frizzy!"
My "STOP". My lollipop.
My bunny poo. My slimy goo.
My birthday cake. My "sorry I just ate".
My "ugh I want to go home!" My "Oh no where is my phone?!?"
My sanitize. my "I need exercise".


This week for Poetry we had to make our own *My* poem. First, we had to get together all 40 memories and then put 2 in each line and try to make them rhyme. I chose to do my whole childhood. I found this activity pretty challenging because the hardest part was trying to find short sentences that ryhme.

Cinquain Poems Part 3

WALT write Cinquain poems. Today for poem writing we had to write Cinquain poems. Cinquain poems are poems where there are five lines and they have to have a syllable pattern the pattern is: First line: 2 syllables
second line: 4 syllables
third line: 6 syllables
the fourth line: 8 syllables
the fifth line: 2 syllables
 These are my two Cinquain poems...

                 Lollies
           Lollies are yum
       there are so many sorts
make sure you brush your teeth after
                  or else

              Scrunchies
             all different
     They are multi-colored
warm, fuzzy, smooth, and so many
                the end

               Classrooms
         Classrooms are rooms
        Look there is a teacher!
Classrooms are places to learn things
               Classrooms

                   All hats
       They keep you safe
  They protect you from sun
There are lot of different hats

Cinquain Poems part 2

WALT write Cinquain poems. Today for poem writing we had to write Cinquain poems. Cinquain poems are poems where there are five lines and they have to have a syllable pattern the pattern is: First line: 2 syllables
second line: 4 syllables
third line: 6 syllables
the fourth line: 8 syllables
the fifth line: 2 syllables 
These are my two Cinquain poems...

                 Toilets
           Toilets are cool
    How would I do without?
Sometimes they stink a little bit
                Toilets

           Soft hair
         everything fair
soft, cool, smooth and fuzzy
you can style it in any way
              cool hair

Cinquain poems

WALT write Cinquain poems. Today for poem writing we had to write Cinquain poems. Cinquain poems are poems where there are five lines and they have to have a syllable pattern the pattern is: First line: 2 syllables
second line: 4 syllables
third line: 6 syllables
the fourth line: 8 syllables
the fifth line: 2 syllables
 These are my two Cinquain poems...

               Cool socks
          warm fuzzy socks
      slipping my feet in socks
now my feet are warm and so soft
                  my socks

                      Water
              It helps you live
           drinking all the water
my throat is now clean and refreshed
                        water

Poetry writing

WALT write poems with onomatopoeia

Walking into the start of school
birds splashing in the pool
children chattering with happy glee
stones hitting and slapping the sea
skipping ropes skimming the ground
oh, what a weird sound.

Today in class we learnt how to use onomatopoeia in poetry. First, we got handed a sheet that had five poems, and the poems had lots of onomatopoeia words in them and an explanation about what onomatopoeia was. So then we had to underline the onomatopoeia words. After we had done that we had to write a poem that had onomatopoeia in it.

ANZAC poem

Australia and New Zealand fight for Britan.

New year another war.

Zooming soldiers to their trenches.

Amazing soldiers fighting for their countries.

Countries fighting against each other.


Dying soldiers in the war.

Anzac day is on the 25th of April.

Young men fight for NewZealand and their countries.


We wrote an ANZAC poem about all the people in the war. The poem is called an acrostic poem. ANZAC day represents world war 1 that happened from 1914 to 1918. Lots of the New Zealand soldiers died before it happened because they were going to land in Turkey and block the Turkey people but they landed in the wrong place so some of the Turkey people killed them and the were busted!